Bula Yasmine, you have good work but you could write more sentences like hay now I can see you.And can you check your sentence on your wonderful drawing please.
I like you awesome strong big tiger it looks like a tough tiger.Also you have good work but you should just add a little bit sentence so it looks you have did big huge work.Was you activity was reading about tigers and do a follow up drawing tigers.You have awesome drawing.
Talofa Jasmine I really like your work Jasmine but you could more improve by adding more sentences in your work OK Jasmine.You have wonderful drawing Jasmine.
Bula Yasmine,
ReplyDeleteyou have good work but you could write more sentences like hay now I can see you.And can you check your sentence on your wonderful drawing please.
Kia Ora Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteI like you awesome strong big tiger it looks like a tough tiger.Also you have good work but you should just add a little bit sentence so it looks you have did big huge work.Was you activity was reading about tigers and do a follow up drawing tigers.You have awesome drawing.
From Raymond
i really like your picture
ReplyDeleteTalofa Jasmine
ReplyDeleteI really like your work Jasmine but you could more improve by adding more sentences in your work OK Jasmine.You have wonderful drawing Jasmine.